Dr Who... hahaha! Yeah.

Ok. I have to dwell on other things, but here's my gripes. There's too much going on, with the biomechanical replicator shaped as a tree, yes, they show the pool room, the observatory, but there's still too much going on and even tho one of the salvagers took a circuit it really was unnecessary.

The "I said you where an android" crap is crap, why would he feel tired and finger nails grow and feel pain when you stub your toe, need oxygen in space or need to eat. It was rubbish. But also, how was it the time line for that incident went so back to change the history of that family so much they had a photo of their father there. I didn't like the steel rods chasing them down the corridor. It was not necessary to have these things, they confuse.

I didn't like the corridors at all. Ha, liked the library, and for those who had gripes with the war book, yes the Tardis translates languages using the translation circuit, but I had issues with the pram that still showed Gallifreyan on the side. Also, I would like to know who wrote a book on the time war, another mystery considering The Doctors feelings about the matter.

Yes, his name was there, I see that the book in itself would be more than a conventional book, as it would be not just words on a page, more like a memory in a book. Just like the vials above when she was hiding from the phantom of time.

Speaking of, I quite liked the phantoms of time (zombies) and even to the point that one mimicked Clara in the control room, that led to the broken time which lead to the idea of a fracture like in the past seasons. Also liked the time being held in the engine room and the Tardis protecting itself for several different reasons. The eye of harmony was supposed to be an artificial black hole. Even scenes from Hitch hikers Guide to the Galaxy and Charlie and the Chocolate factory where more amazing and seemed fantastic by comparison.

I didn't like the scrawling of the message in Clara's hand, that is a paradox and even tho her hand was soft and human, it was healing inverse of time of events which really only could work if the time for Clara was going backwards, but just for her hand, no, that is crap. I'd rather The Doctor think of scrawling it as a message for The Doctor to follow and not look so shocked when he saw himself and hit the button, he's a Timelord ffs.

That's my two cents.

K.